Hi buddy!

You asked for my feedback so here it is

I would recommend trying to flesh things out a little bit more. You don't have to write long updates or anything, but I couldn't quite figure out where the story started. I actually read through all the Chris Hunter posts first before I realized that it wasn't a part of the Coach Rice story So just a few sentences here and there to let the readers know who coach Rice is, who he is coaching and so on would be nice and maybe just a sentence or two to introduce the statistics you post? Posting a table of stats is fine and easy enough to read, but a sentence or two about what we're looking at, why we're looking at it and how it relates to coach Rice would help the story I think.

Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the feedback. I started the Chris Hunter story, and decided I wasn't all that much in to it. I decided to pick my coaching career back up, but I didn't do a good job of transitioning my intentions.

I will try to get a few blurbs in to explain what my post is. I'm not too good of a writer, so I usually stay away from it.

Thanks for the input, and I'll see if I can't get a better story going.